The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These figures depict the
budget
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for the police in one area of Britain between 2017 and 2018. It is clear from the graph that there was
decreased
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in the salary and an increase in technology spending.
According to
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what is shown most of the income of the police
budget
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from the National Government with 175.5 m in 2017, but there was a slight increase in 2018 with 177.8 m. The next income from the local Axes with 91.2 in 2017 to 102m 2.3 million in 2018.
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, there was growth in the
budget
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with an extra 14 million in 2018, but there was a decline in the spending of their salaries from 75% of the
budget
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to 69%, but if we notice there was a growth in technology with an extra 6%.
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the buildings and the transport were stable in these years.
To sum up
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, we could say that the
budget
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increased, but they put more money to evolve the technology part.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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