Nowadays shopping is very easy that you do not need to go there physically and buy. You can just order online and get your groceries or clothes by you do steps. You get to pay online using your device and that's it.
I totally disagree because
itsCorrect your spelling
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better to view a product physically than by online services. You don't get to see the exact text of the item you want to buy. Sometimes you get
wrongCorrect article usage
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sizes or
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product which you enquire
thenLinking Words
Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
you have
exchangeFix the infinitive
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or returned which might be
time consumingAdd a hyphen
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. You will have to go by yourself to exchange or wait for the collection. They
isChange the verb form
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no quality check of yourself.
Shopping directly to the shop has
a lotsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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of advantages. You have many choices, when you are buying clothes you get to fit them to make sure that
theirCorrect pronoun usage
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are the right sizes and they fit nicely compared to online
wereCorrect your spelling
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by Change preposition
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you only see the advert of someone wearing it. The choice of choosing different colours, styles and patterns.
OnChange preposition
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my
on Change preposition
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observation shops will not close down anytime people want to see what they are buying,
yoCorrect your spelling
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have a choice not to be in the dark. Choice of going to buy fresh foods or fruits
though Correct word choice
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online might be convenient and saves money spent. They are people who
lovesChange the verb form
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going out to shops to window shop and relax.