The chart below shows the level of satisfaction of health care system in four countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the level of satisfaction of health care system in four countries in three years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below shows us the level of satisfaction with the healthcare system in four countries in three years. The countries that are shown in the chart are Canada, the Netherlands, the United Kingdom, and the USA. The chart
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shows the percentage of each country in 1991, 1998, and 2006.
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the data, there are 3 tendencies of satisfaction in 4 countries. The data shows the relatively same direction for Netherlands and USA, which has their heights in 1998 at 51% and 17% respectively. But, Netherlands' number dropped in 2006 to 42% and the USA kept maintained its number at 17%. Surprisingly, the United Kingdom's number of satisfaction wasn't changed over time, about 28% in 1991, 1998, and 2006. That trend is very different from Canada's with very fluctuating movement. Canada made its peak in 1991 at about 62%
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but declined sharply to 23% in 1998, and rose again to 30% in 2006.
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