In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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, young

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are choosing to do training at work.

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has benefits for both

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society and the young, but some drawbacks

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exist.

University

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gives

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more opportunities to choose a good career, so they feel more satisfied

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their job, have high salaries and

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possibility

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improve their education with

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degree in the future. Hopefully, they will

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teach other young

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so that the country remains

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in the future.

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, many workers need to have a degree on their CV when they apply

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a job.

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, several young

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take advantage of opportunities to gain valuable

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in the workplace as soon as possible.

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mean

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they can earn some money and

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get training for their future career.

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, many companies offer

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or

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,

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as engineering companies where young

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can work to learn,

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of study. Sometimes the things we learn from real life are more important than books.

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,

experience

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from work is very useful. You can have a more fun life in the office, meeting and going out with colleagues is a good way to improve your sociality. Many

people

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meet their friends from their job

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but only have a few friends from the

university

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. Often, workplaces have many events, like parties, which may be fun for young

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. In conclusion, there are many advantages of

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education, but I believe the benefits of

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experience

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are greater, as they are possible for all and allow young

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to have awareness and

experience

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to earn a good salary from their career.