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The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011

The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011
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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of
people
 of distinct
age
groups
 going to the cinema in one European country over a period of 11 years between 2000 and 2011.
Overall
,
It is clear that
 there was an upward trend in the figure for
people
 of distinct
age
groups
 who went to the cinema in
this
 country during the whole period shown.
Moreover
, the percentage of
people
of
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15
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the 15
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 - 24
age
groups
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 is
rise
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 in most other
groups
. In terms of all four line
graph
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graphs
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, there were under 20% of
audience
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the audience
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 of different
age
groups
 in the year
of
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2000.
Although
, the human
of
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15 - 24
age
groups
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group
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 still hit a peak.
The
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 end of
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periods
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period
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, the proportion of
audience
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the audience
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 of 35 and over
age
groups
 finished low at approximately 10%.
While
 the percentage of
people
of
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15
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the 15
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 - 24
age
groups
 witnessed a growth stood at over 50%, the remaining two
age
groups
seen
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 an increase to the range of 20 - 30%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, groups with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cinema-going
  • Attendance
  • Frequency
  • Demographics
  • Trends
  • Percentage
  • Fluctuations
  • Technological advancements
  • Streaming services
  • Leisure activity
  • Data analysis
  • Decrease/increase
  • Age groups: Teenagers, Young adults, Middle-aged, Seniors
  • Periodic comparison
  • Socioeconomic factors
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