Nowadays, as a part of the educational process, students work at a company for a short period of time without pay. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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that
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by
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a comapny
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comapny
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company
for students to
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without pay. It is a significant opportunity for scholars to gain experience before starting their
career
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.
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,
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job without pay could decrease
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motivation.
Therefore
, I disagree the benefits of
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work
outwiegh
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outweigh
the disadvantages.
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the
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relevant working experience
that is
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condition for hiring.
The individuals
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with related experiences have more opportunities to
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have a
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job
interview
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. One of the main
factor
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is that
mployers
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employers
would prefer to hire a worker who has
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worked in
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specific field, thereby,
applicant
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could provide
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considerable value to their business.
Moreover
, training from companies could
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to save
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resources. In fact, the drawbacks of the salary-free internship
is
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outwiegh
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outweigh
advantages
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the advantages
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.
For example
, money is a sufficient tool to push the motivation of
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. Workers might not take all the
responsiblity
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responsibility
due to
the low motivation.
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, it
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that they will not get any prize even though how hard they
work
.
This
action of irresponsibility
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the quality of their
work
.
Furthermore
, it has
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a negative
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impact on companies.
To conclude
, the arrangement that
providing
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learner to
work
in
company
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the company
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by education authorities have positive advantages,
such
as the gaining of working experience .
However
, it is important to
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the
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both
side
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. In my opinion, if authorities set the minimum salary, there would be more reason for people to
work
as hard as they can.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • internship
  • practical experience
  • networking
  • soft skills
  • hard skills
  • career aspirations
  • resume
  • job market
  • work ethic
  • professionalism
  • exploitation
  • financial strain
  • inequality
  • educational value
  • work setting
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