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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
A group of individuals present the view that any type of crime should have a fixed penalty, whereas others believe that the conditions of criminals and the motive for committing crime should be considered for making decisions on punishment. I strongly agree with the former opinion and my reasons for that will be presented in the following paragraphs.
Taking a gap year between high school and university is increasingly popular among young people in some countries. This period, often used for work or travel, offers both advantages and disadvantages.
It is a fact that today’s children represent the future prosperity for our societies. However, children nowadays are growing less and less interested toward all sorts of physical demanding activities especially the outdoors ones such as hiking, climbing mountains and the simplest forms of nature enjoyment. In the next paragraphs, the reasons for this developing crisis and the ways to antagonize it will be discussed.
There exists a viewpoint in the contemporary discourse asserting that, in comparison to previous times, criminal activities are reducing to a great extent as a result of a dramatic surge in technologies that inhibit the occurrence of illegal activities and make it easier to resolve them. I strongly agree with this statement, and I will justify my stance in the following paragraphs.