Do you believe that celebrities are ill-treated by the media, or is this the price they have to pay for their stardom? Regardless of fame, should their privacy be respected or not? What is your opinion?

These days, society invades
into
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a private
life
of stars through the
media
who,
as a result
, become victims of their popularity. I opine that popular figures’ privacy should be respected as average
citizen
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,
however
, as they influence a public trend; it is better that some rules need to be followed. On the one hand, most
of
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fans follow idols on social
media
and are eager to know about every detail of the stars’
life
.
Such
kind of curiosity affects popular people negatively.
For instance
, because of the
paparazzi
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they can not take a walk in public places and have to hide their faces even in their own yard. Trying to shoot every action of a celebrity and to attempt to know secrets of his
life
is unjustified, since, everyone has a right to keep it away from the public eye.
On the other hand
, celebrities should obey certain rules
such
as not consuming drugs, alcohol,
tobacco
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and avoiding advertising of bets which is considered
as
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the
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one of the main reasons
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poverty, nowadays. Unfortunately, many rap singers popularize “gangster
life
” by behaving aggressively, using guns and taking narcotics.
Consequently
, teenagers who follow them have started copying
such
a lifestyle and,
as a result
, may ruin their
life
.
To sum up
, in
this
era of information, celebrities become the main objects of public
media
.
Therefore
,
this
fact arises some issues around the privacy of the figures. I opine that
media
platforms should not break the borders of the
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private
life
,
whereas
those, who are the main influencers, need to be well-behaved and keep a healthy lifestyle in order to affect society in a positive aspect.
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