The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart gives information about the number of prisoners in
such
nations as Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, the United States and Canada from 1930 to 1980.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the United States was the highest amount of prisoners (in 1940 more than 120 thousand people and in 1980 nearly 140 people) than other regions. Also
, the lowest figures for imprisonment were in 1930 and 1950 the same amount in the United Kingdom.
Additionally
, in Great Britain has been a steady growth of captives since 1940. Whereas
Australia and New Zealand experienced fluctuation during this
time span. The United States had also
quite a bit of oscillation, however
it was a far higher number of inmates than other regions. The Add a comma
,however
last
region, Canada was the second country that had a higher rate of inmates. Nevertheless
, there is a moderately
plummet with a slight fluctuation. In 1930, the number of prisoners was 120 thousand, but in 1980 dropped to 90 thousand inmates.Submitted by shansharova.assel on
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