Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution prob- lems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Increasing the price of petrol absolutely affects transportation aspects in the world.
While
some argue that increasing the petrol tariff can reduce
traffic
and pollution problems, others contend that
this
phenomenon will not affect
both
much.
This
essay will explore
both
perspective and personal opinions on the matter and
also
the effective measures to tackle these issues.
Firstly
, the rise in
gas
prices will make society think twice to use private vehicles. Every person will suddenly affect by
this
rise, especially low-middle-income people. They can't afford
gas
as much as before the increase in
gas
cost.
For example
, the sale of
gas
in Indonesia dropped by 35% when the government decided to remove the subsidized
gas
in June 2022 and reduced
traffic
by 20%. But,
on the other hand
, these effects will not
last
long. Upper-middle income families still can afford the
gas
. As data speak, 70% of car ownership in Indonesia is owned by upper-middle-income families.
Furthermore
, more people in the world, especially 57% of people in Indonesia, don't have adequate access to public transport.
As a result
, they are forced to use their own vehicles to mobilize every day. Nowadays, the intensity of
traffic
in Jakarta is even higher than before the authority's decision. In my respective opinion, aligning with
this
paragraph, increasing the
gas
price is just a short-term measure to tackle
traffic
and pollution problems.
To conclude
these discussions, I believe that there must be greater decisions that the ministry must take to tackle
both
problems. The government will have to build and develop more public transport in urban and rural areas. Decreasing the dependency on private vehicles can significantly reduce 30% of air pollution.
However
, even if the petrol price is rising, the transportation costs can still be reduced if the transport volume of each vehicle increases,
both
for freights and passengers.
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