You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visit you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the unhygienic conditions of the society swimming pool.
Firstly
, whenever I went there for swimming classes, I always found it clean and tidy, but a week ago, I experienced a stingy smell coming out of the
water
.
Secondly
, there were worms floating in the pool.
Furthermore
, I complained about the situation I had gone through to the staff, and they assured me that they would definitely look into
this
matter. But, unfortunately, they did not take any steps for the purification of
water
. When I visited yesterday, there was an extremely bad smell in the
water
, and insects were there as well. How would anyone swim there with worms and insects? I,
therefore
, kindly request you to take some measures and ask about a registered complaint from the management staff.
Moreover
, you could have better expertise regarding swimming pool management than me ,
still
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I would be immensely grateful to you if you consider my advice of using chlorine chemicals on a daily basis, as it will kill insects
as well as
purify the
water
. Thank you in advance Yours Faithfully, Marium
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