You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visit you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the unhygienic conditions of the society swimming pool.

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, whenever I went there for swimming classes, I always found it clean and tidy, but a week ago, I experienced a stingy smell coming out of the

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, there were worms floating in the pool.

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, I complained about the situation I had gone through to the staff, and they assured me that they would definitely look into

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matter. But, unfortunately, they did not take any steps for the purification of

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. When I visited yesterday, there was an extremely bad smell in the

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, and insects were there as well. How would anyone swim there with worms and insects? I,

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, kindly request you to take some measures and ask about a registered complaint from the management staff.

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, you could have better expertise regarding swimming pool management than me ,

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I would be immensely grateful to you if you consider my advice of using chlorine chemicals on a daily basis, as it will kill insects

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purify the

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. Thank you in advance Yours Faithfully, Marium