You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visit you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to report an incident that took place in your academy on 15th October and I seek your utmost attention to
this
matter. I am a premium member of your club and I use the indoor
pool
very often. These pools are dedicated for adults to relax and practise but yesterday, I happened to notice a few kids playing the
pool
nearby without any adult supervision. I managed to call the staff immediately. He could have helped by getting the children outside
instead
he was so rude and neglected me as it was not his job. I
then
managed to get the children out by myself and informed the incident
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the front desk. I think
this
is a safety issue that needs to be resolved immediately by possibly appointing a security guard near the
pool
thus
restricting the access to the
pool
by young people. I look forward to hearing back from you about the action taken to resolve
this
issue. Yours Faithfully, Green.
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