You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visit you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to report an incident that took place in your academy on 15th October and I seek your utmost attention to

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matter. I am a premium member of your club and I use the indoor

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very often. These pools are dedicated for adults to relax and practise but yesterday, I happened to notice a few kids playing the

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nearby without any adult supervision. I managed to call the staff immediately. He could have helped by getting the children outside

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he was so rude and neglected me as it was not his job. I

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managed to get the children out by myself and informed the incident

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the front desk. I think

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is a safety issue that needs to be resolved immediately by possibly appointing a security guard near the

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restricting the access to the

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by young people. I look forward to hearing back from you about the action taken to resolve

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issue. Yours Faithfully, Green.