The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make coparison where relevant.

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The presented diagram shows

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apply

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information about

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the bydroelectric

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bydroelectric

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hydroelectric

hydro electric

power station which produces electricity day and night.

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, if we look at

this

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diagram carefully there are two

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reservoir

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but their

fanction

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functions

not

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are not

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the same.

High-level

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The high-level

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reservoir's

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reservoirs

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dam is closed at night and opened

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during a

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the

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day but

low-level

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the low-level

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reservoir

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's dam operates

generator

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a generator

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and

pump

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pumps

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water within a day.

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water comes to the

reservoir

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from

river

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the river

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and

gathering

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gathers

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there when

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reservoir

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the reservoir

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fulled

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then

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dam

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the dam

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is opened to

producing

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produce

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electricity. Following that

reservoir

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's turbines to performance two

fanctions

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functions

factions

first it operates

generater

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generator

generate

and in the power

station

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it is

readed

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read

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to the consumption.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words reservoir with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

102 words

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