Even though globalization has some very positive effects, we cant forget its negative effects. What are the disadvantages and advantages of globalization?

Globalization
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a significant role in
modern
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world. There are many merits of
globalization
such
, improve the
countries
,
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a job
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job
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for
people
,
however
,
also
globalization
have
dmertis
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demerits
merits
including, environmental issues,
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exploit
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workers
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. Regarding benefits,
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,
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sperad
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spread
of multinational
companies
can have a positive impact
especially
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in developing nations . To illustrate, nowadays, many international
companies
invest money
on
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poor
countries
in infrastructure namely, healthcare, education,
energy
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sectros
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sectors
sector
, which can help to fight
dieases
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diseases
disease
and give the local
people
access to better education
,
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and provide electricity.
As a result
,
this
investment can help to provide high standards
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of
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for local
people
in underdeveloped
countries
.
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advantage,
globlization
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globalization
globalisation
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jobs opportunity and income for local
people
.
For example
,Apple company have many branches in numerous
countries
worldwide, and it
employ
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thousands
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people
in different fields
such
as
,
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marketing,
working
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in factories for
production
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the production
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of parts of electronic
deveices
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devices
.
Therefore
,
this
can help to reduce the rate of poverty and crime.
Although
globalization
can bring advantages, but
also
it
have
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number
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of drawbacks. To
bging
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begin
with, many international
companies
work in
field
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of energy which can
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to negative consequences on the ecosystem.
In other words
, some multinational
companies
do not care about the environment .
which
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they run their factories using fossil
fuel
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.
Thus
,
this
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factories produce a considerable amount of carbon
foorprint
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footprint
, which can
leads
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to air pollution
as well as
will increase global warming and climate change.
Secondly
, some international
companies
exploit children to work under inhuman conditions
such
as
,
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long hours of
works
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work
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,
low
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and low
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salaries. In conclusion,
the
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globilzation
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globalisation
can have upsides
inclduing
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including
, enhance the standard of
people
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live,
provide
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and provide
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jobs
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opportunities,
however
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also
it
have
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downsides
such
,
environmental
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as environmental
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issues,
unacceptable
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and unacceptable
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circumstances for employees.
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