You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to my recent purchase from your online store. I bought two pairs of

pants

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and a T-shirt. My purchase was

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Monday 31st May the purchase code is GH438745K. I have a problem with the size of the

pants

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, the sent

pants

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size are large and I ordered a medium size of the

pants

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, the T-shirt's colour is not as same as the one which you show in the picture on your website,

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, I want you to send me the blue one which is shown in the picture. Actually, I am invited to an important meeting next Sunday, so I need the new clothes to put on for the meeting,

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, I want you to make the replacement urgently as soon as you can. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Thank you in advance, Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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157 words

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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With deforestration, urban development and illigal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitats and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measuers can be taken to deal with this problem.

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