The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of
consumption
of Use synonyms
wheat
, maize, and rice in four different countries.
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Overall
, the highest consumed food on average is Linking Words
wheat
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instead
of the other choices. Linking Words
On the other hand
, maize has the lowest Linking Words
calories
to eat. Use synonyms
Egypt
generally has the most Use synonyms
consumption
of the basic foods, Use synonyms
whereas
, Poland is the least consumptive country.
Cambodia accounts for the most Linking Words
consumption
of rice which takes 1445 Use synonyms
calories
per Use synonyms
peson
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person
Egypt
is almost 3 times lower (501). The other remaining countries Use synonyms
is
only about 30 Change the verb form
are
calories
per day on average.
In terms of Use synonyms
wheat
, the Use synonyms
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
calories
in Use synonyms
Egypt
for it is 1095 Use synonyms
calories
compared to Cambodia which spent the least (18). Poland and Mexico consume Use synonyms
wheat
for 865 and 275 respectively. People in Mexico eat maize based-foods for 1083 Use synonyms
calories
per day. Meanwhile, Cambodia and Use synonyms
Egypt
are 350 Use synonyms
calories
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on
average Change preposition
in
consumption
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