The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of
consumption
of wheat
, maize, and rice in four different countries.
Overall
, the highest consumed food on average is wheat
instead
of the other choices. On the other hand
, maize has the lowest calories
to eat. Egypt
generally has the most consumption
of the basic foods, whereas
, Poland is the least consumptive country.
Cambodia accounts for the most consumption
of rice which takes 1445 calories
per peson
and Correct your spelling
person
Egypt
is almost 3 times lower (501). The other remaining countries is
only about 30 Change the verb form
are
calories
per day on average.
In terms of wheat
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
calories
in Egypt
for it is 1095 calories
compared to Cambodia which spent the least (18). Poland and Mexico consume wheat
for 865 and 275 respectively. People in Mexico eat maize based-foods for 1083 calories
per day. Meanwhile, Cambodia and Egypt
are 350 calories
on
average Change preposition
in
consumption
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