The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did a regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart gives information about the males and females of Australia in various

age

groups who engaged

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physical activity regularly in 2010.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the number of

women

was always more than

men

except for the young

age

group

.

Firstly

, the peak of

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percentage is reached by

men

in the 15 to 24

group

, which is 52.8%.

Next

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groups (25-34) percentage-wise dropped dramatically to 42.2%. The lowest point was hit by

men

in the 35 to 44

group

which is 39.5%. After that, the number of males doing physical activity constantly go up steadily

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and finished with 46.7% being almost the

women

's rate. It is reached by the

men

in

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and over

group

.

On the other hand

,

women

's rate shows some fluctuations in different

age

groups. Started

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47.7%

women

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in 15 to 24 ages. Afterwards, it rose slightly to 48.9%

by

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the

women

in the 25 to 34

age

group

.

Then

, grew steadily to 53.3%, which is reached by the female in the 45 to 54

age

group

.

Then

the

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declined minimally to 53%, but it fell to 47.1% and hit the lowest point of the

female's

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rate.