The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did a regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart gives information about the males and females of Australia in various
age
groups who engaged Use synonyms
to
physical activity regularly in 2010.
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in
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of Linking Words
women
was always more than Use synonyms
men
except for the young Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
.
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Firstly
, the peak of Linking Words
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the male's
male's
percentage is reached by Change noun form
male
men
in the 15 to 24 Use synonyms
group
, which is 52.8%. Use synonyms
Next
groups (25-34) percentage-wise dropped dramatically to 42.2%. The lowest point was hit by Correct article usage
The next
men
in the 35 to 44 Use synonyms
group
which is 39.5%. After that, the number of males doing physical activity constantly go up steadilyUse synonyms
,
and finished with 46.7% being almost the Remove the comma
apply
women
's rate. It is reached by the Use synonyms
men
in Use synonyms
65
and over Correct article usage
the 65
group
.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
women
's rate shows some fluctuations in different Use synonyms
age
groups. Started Use synonyms
being
47.7% Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
women
in 15 to 24 ages. Afterwards, it rose slightly to 48.9% Change preposition
of women
by
the Change preposition
of
women
in the 25 to 34 Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
. Use synonyms
Then
, grew steadily to 53.3%, which is reached by the female in the 45 to 54 Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
group
. Use synonyms
Then
the Linking Words
percentages
declined minimally to 53%, but it fell to 47.1% and hit the lowest point of the Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
female's
rate.Change noun form
female
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