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ne technologies have changed the way children spend theri free time. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disdvantage?

#technologies #children #theri #time #outweigh #disdvantage
A big reason
for
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city dwellers feel difficult to do enough physical
execise
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exercise
 is because doing physical
exercise
 is not their
priorities
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.
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 people,
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especially
epecially
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young adults who are living in big cities they think that making money is the most important thing, they can sacrifice their health to make more money. They always have
resonable
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reasonable
 reasons to justify
for
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not getting enough
exercise
such
 as they are too busy with their work to get
exercies
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exercise
exercises
 or they have other responsibilities so they
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lack
of
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time to work out. All in all, the biggest reason they do not get enough
exercise
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 they do not choose to do it, because if they prioritize their health, everything else is on schedule. There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above.
Firstly
, the government should encourage citizens doing
exercise
 regularly by investing in and maintaining parks and green spaces
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 provide people with safe and accessible places to be active and enjoy nature.
Secondly
, In conclusion,
although
 people in big cities could not get enough physical
exercise
 and measures can be implemented to tackle
this
 issue.
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