ne technologies have changed the way children spend theri free time. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disdvantage?

A big reason

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city dwellers feel difficult to do enough physical

execise

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exercise

is because doing physical

exercise

is not their

priorities

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.

For some

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people,

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especially

epecially

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especially

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young adults who are living in big cities they think that making money is the most important thing, they can sacrifice their health to make more money. They always have

resonable

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reasonable

reasons to justify

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not getting enough

exercise

such

as they are too busy with their work to get

exercies

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exercise

exercises

or they have other responsibilities so they

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lack

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time to work out. All in all, the biggest reason they do not get enough

exercise

is

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they do not choose to do it, because if they prioritize their health, everything else is on schedule. There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above.

Firstly

, the government should encourage citizens doing

exercise

regularly by investing in and maintaining parks and green spaces

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provide people with safe and accessible places to be active and enjoy nature.

Secondly

, In conclusion,

although

people in big cities could not get enough physical

exercise

and measures can be implemented to tackle

this

issue.