Nowadays students can access information online, so library services are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

For decades,

library

membership is being diminished as time goes by all around the world.

This

is because surfing the net is

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bookshop. I agree to some extent with

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opinion. In

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essay, I will explain my view with relevant examples.

Initially

, the majority of folks consider that a high amount of available information on the internet is not reliable

whereas

everyone can share data on

this

platform without any security

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. It means wrong information can be gained by communities at which point put people in trouble. As proven by statistics, two out of every five articles that are written by university students are full of incorrect reports since they are collected from ineffective websites.

As a consequence

, free access to an array of Intelligence on the net can spread misinformation, and

hence

, folks obtain worthless data

instead

of useful ones.

On the other hand

, a growing number of communities ponder that

library

service is not serviceable because of special opening

hours

instead

of full

hours

service so in the opening time, libraries are full of avid readers who are inclined to borrow Books which means you have to wait for days to obtain your favourite volumes so it is not helpful if you have a limited time.

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, if

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university student has to write a dissertation

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the end of June, he would not have adequate period to wait until the end of August.

As a result

, not only bookshop

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are not accessible

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24

hours

a day but

also

are out of needed volumes, and

hence

, readers opt to rely on other methods. In conclusion, folks can access

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a large amount of knowledge either online or

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. Personally, in my opinion, if the government could check all data shared on websites

as well as

increase

library

hours

and volume availability, it would give a helping hand to enhance human Intelligence

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both

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and the internet.