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The charts below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by one university in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by one university in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie charts depict the spending of the income for one university in different areas. It is clear from the graph that the most money goes into teaching and research.
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, there was a slightly decreased in teaching and research from 53% in 2005 to 48% in 2015.
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, there was a decline in libraries with half of the budget from 10% to 5%.
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there was an increase in financial support for students with an extra 3% in 2015 from 5% to 8%.
Lastly
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, there was a growth in the administration and management by more than double.
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, we could say that there was a decline between 5 to 8 per cent in some areas, but I notice that there was a huge increase in the administration and management.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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