Nowadays, many people have to work longer time,and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?

The majority of

people

across the world, choose wealth over well-being.

However

,

this

makes

people

have to spend more

time

and did not really have

time

to spend with their family or take a break.

This

essay will discuss the causes and

the

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possible solutions for

this

phenomenon. There are several main reasons that

causes

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this

issue, which the first is to cover everyday needs.

People

could not have one job only with

basic

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sallary

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salary

, especially if they have kids.

Furthermore

,

besides

secondary needs,

people

have to entertain their

family

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families

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.

For example

, my uncle has to work double jobs so that he can provide the best electronic appliances at home for his family.

Secondly

,

although

it is tiring and

lead

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to

burn out

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burnout

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, our community would not settle for less and prefer struggling to provide a

convinient

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convenient

life for their family.

Consequently

, they did not have enough

time

to relax and

to

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enjoy their own money.

On the other hand

,

besides

working, our society

have

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to implement a concept that we have to care for our mental health.

Human

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Humans

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barely care for their own happiness, though they are working so hard. Unless individuals give enough attention to

self care

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self-care

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,

this

could lead to a severe mental illness.

For instance

, my friend always

buy

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buys

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something as self

rewards

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reward

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every month after her company pay her salary.

Hence

,

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the self

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self reward

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self-reward

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is

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paramounth

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paramount

thing that society can do in order to increase our well-being, individuals can buy something or spend their money

to

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on

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something less important. In conclusion, because almost every aspect

in

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of

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human life

are

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expensive,

workforce

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the workforce

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have

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has

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to spend the majority of their

time

in

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finishing the tasks. Meanwhile, it has drawbacks in decreasing

people

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people's

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well-being.

Therefore

, the best

sollution

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solution

we can do is

appriciate

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appreciate

ourselves by

buy

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buying

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something nice or dinner in

an expensive restaurants

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an expensive restaurant

expensive restaurants

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once in a

while

.