The majority of 
people
 across the world, choose wealth over well-being. Use synonyms
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this
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people
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time
 and did not really have Use synonyms
time
 to spend with their family or take a break. Use synonyms
This
 essay will discuss the causes and Linking Words
the 
possible solutions for Correct article usage
apply
this
 phenomenon. 
There are several main reasons that Linking Words
causes
 Change the verb form
cause
this
 issue, which the first is to cover everyday needs. Linking Words
People
 could not have one job only with Use synonyms
basic
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a basic
sallary
, especially if they have kids. Correct your spelling
salary
Furthermore
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besides
 secondary needs, Linking Words
people
 have to entertain their Use synonyms
family
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families
For example
, my uncle has to work double jobs so that he can provide the best electronic appliances at home for his family. Linking Words
Secondly
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although
 it is tiring and Linking Words
lead
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leads
burn out
, our community would not settle for less and prefer struggling to provide a Correct your spelling
burnout
convinient
 life for their family. Correct your spelling
convenient
Consequently
, they did not have enough Linking Words
time
 to relax and Use synonyms
to 
enjoy their own money. 
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apply
On the other hand
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besides
 working, our society Linking Words
have
 to implement a concept that we have to care for our mental health. Change the verb form
has
Human
 barely care for their own happiness, though they are working so hard. Unless individuals give enough attention to Fix the agreement mistake
Humans
self care
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self-care
this
 could lead to a severe mental illness. Linking Words
For instance
, my friend always Linking Words
buy
 something as self Change the verb form
buys
rewards
 every month after her company pay her salary. Fix the agreement mistake
reward
Hence
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the self
self reward
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self-reward
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a paramounth
paramounth
 thing that society can do in order to increase our well-being, individuals can buy something or spend their money Correct your spelling
paramount
to
 something less important. 
In conclusion, because almost every aspect Change preposition
on
in
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of
are
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is
workforce
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the workforce
have
 to spend the majority of their Change the verb form
has
time
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in 
finishing the tasks. Meanwhile, it has drawbacks in decreasing Change preposition
apply
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people
 well-being. Change noun form
people's
Therefore
, the best Linking Words
sollution
 we can do is Correct your spelling
solution
appriciate
 ourselves by Correct your spelling
appreciate
buy
 something nice or dinner in Change the verb form
buying
an expensive restaurants
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an expensive restaurant
expensive restaurants
while
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