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In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

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Many argue that
arts
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 are only suitable for
girls
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,
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science
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 is an option for
boys
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 in schools and universities. I think that there exist several obvious reasons behind
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 tendency and I believe some of them should be altered. There are several reasons why female students tend to choose
arts
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 and male students prefer
science
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.
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, they choose these
subjects
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 because they are interested in them.
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,
girls
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 enjoy cute and romantic things, so they often choose art. Another reason for
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 trend is that our community still holds gender prejudices toward guys and ladies from birth. Females are thought to be skilled in activities related to the
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,
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 as cooking or painting.
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, parents may believe that if their son is a "real man," he needs to excel in
science
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 and perform well on exams in school and university.
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,
boys
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 and schoolgirl may choose their
subjects
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 based on gender stereotypes and their parents' wishes rather than their interests or passions.
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, I suppose students have the right choice of which ability they are willing to develop at school and university by registering
subjects
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 that they know about their strengths and interests so that they are more likely to become successful in the future.
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, society should have an open view about what careers is for female and what is for male, not lean on those backward gender prejudices. In conclusion,
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girls
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 frequently want to learn
arts
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 and
boys
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 favour
science
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 more, both
boys
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 and
girls
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 should equally have the chance to take their options about
subjects
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 at school and universities.
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