The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart illustrates the proportion of
books
read by each gender at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014.
Overall
, there were different trends between men
and women
. Women
were the leader in reading books
in the library while
men
took second place. However
, men
became the most significant for reading books
at the end
of the year 2014.
In the beginning, the proportion of books
women
read was 5,000 books
and slightly grew to 8,000 books
in 2012. Meanwhile, the total of books
read by men
was more than 2,000 books
and rose to double (4,000 books
) in 2012.
In the year 2013, both gender equally shared the same number of books
approximately 10,000 books
. After that, the number of books
read by women
dropped to 8,000 books
opposite to the number of books
read by men
which increased to 14,000 books
over one year.Submitted by gor_toey on
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