The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The map gives information about the landscapes in an industrial area in the

town

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of Norbiton and will show the plan which will change developments in the future. From an

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perspective, it can be seen that a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from factorized area to

modernized

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zone which will become

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area

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full of amenities

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as housing, playground, school , shops and so on. The

town

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is lack

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modern

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and solely factories are constructed recently. The circular

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will be rebuilt

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more straightforwardly to transport along the river to both the west and east of the

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.

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of the

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which

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north-west of the

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, two new houses and shops will be built. The farmland is going to move aside

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a new route in the north of the city. All of the factories will be knocked down in order to instruct a school and a playground which near

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the river. A medical centre

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will be built near the main road for providing a better quality cure method. A similar trend

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the two houses,

school

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will be seen

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of the

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north of the

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.