The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The map gives information about the landscapes in an industrial area in the
town
of Norbiton and will show the plan which will change developments in the future.
From an overall
perspective, it can be seen that a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from factorized area to modernized
zone which will become Add an article
a modernized
the modernized
the
area Correct article usage
an
with
full of amenities Change preposition
apply
such
as housing, playground, school , shops and so on.
The town
is lack of
modern Change preposition
apply
building
and solely factories are constructed recently. The circular Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
bridge
will be rebuilt into
more straightforwardly to transport along the river to both the west and east of the Change preposition
apply
town
. At the end
of the bridge
which intended
to Add a missing verb
is intended
the
north-west of the Add a missing verb
be the
town
, two new houses and shops will be built.
The farmland is going to move aside due to
a new route in the north of the city. All of the factories will be knocked down in order to instruct a school and a playground which near to
the river. A medical centre Change preposition
apply
that
will be built near the main road for providing a better quality cure method.
A similar trend Correct pronoun usage
apply
with
the two houses, Change preposition
to
school
will be seen Add an article
the school
at the end
of the bridge
north of the bridge
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, bridge with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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