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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #risks #lives
Many
people
 argue that there is a vital fact for taking risks not only in their professional lives but
also
 in their personal lives. The main advantage for a
risk
-taker is that he gets much exposure
what
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 is failure rather than a
people
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person
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 who does not like to take risks in
life
 and when it comes to
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 some
life
 problems, he does not hesitant somewhat to fight it back.
Although
 these can be beneficial, there are some disadvantages for
people
 that they need to worry about everything which is on the margin and they will feel like they live on the edge. In my opinion, despite these downsides, the benefits are more significant than the drawbacks. In
this
 essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the
arguments
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. On the one hand, taking risks poses many challenges. The most significant drawback is that a person may have to deal with worries.
For example
, a person who always
do
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 an assignment late which his teacher gives
it
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to him will need to
do
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rush all the time and
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 about whether it will be finished or not on the deadline. Another
risk
 problem in professional
life
 is that all of the money of a shareholder will be gone when there is a sharp drop in shares and it raises the rates of suicide dramatically in every
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 of the world.
On the other hand
, I would argue that taking
risk
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 can be given us encouragement
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 to live. The foremost benefit of
that is
 every
risk
-taker knows the feeling of failure and the feeling of accomplishment
thus
 they have courage enough to face some difficulties in real
life
.
For instance
, in both professional and personal
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, if we know about failure when we encounter
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 blocks of obstacles in our own
path way
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, it would be more
straightforwardly
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 to accept up and
down sides
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 of
life
. All in all, the fact that more and more
people
 enjoy taking
risk
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 is a clear indication that the advantages of
this
 development outweigh the disadvantages. Needless to say, there are some minor drawbacks to pursuing some difficulties in
life
,
whereas
 a person who is willing to take
risk
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 in
respective
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 field can overcome all of the snags in real
life
.
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