The chart shows the average life expectancy for males and females in 1900, 1950 and 1990.
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of
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avarage
lifespan for different genders in European Correct your spelling
average
countries
from 1900 to 1990. Overall
, females had longer life expectancy than the
male counterparts for each year,and all genders' predicted lifespans improved over time.
The two Change the word
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countries
that had significantly longer life expectancy than others: Denmark, and Sweden, with 51.6, and 52.8 for males; 54.8, and 55.3 for females, respectively. Both countries
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countries'
years
for each gender in 1990. Moreover
Swedish females had the highest-expected lifespan with 80.7 Add a comma
,Moreover
years
in 1990.
The
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In the
countries
life expectancy also
inclined over time, but males from Austria had the least estimation with 37.8 years
in 1990, which was
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years
to 73.5 years
in 1990. On the other hand
, Germany's and Belgium's estimated figures followed an upward trend over the period of 90 years
. They both had relatively close estimations over time.Submitted by historicalpen on
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