The chart shows the average life expectancy for males and females in 1900, 1950 and 1990.
The given table provides
the
information Correct article usage
apply
of
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on
avarage
lifespan for different genders in European Correct your spelling
average
countries
from 1900 to 1990. Use synonyms
Overall
, females had longer life expectancy than Linking Words
the
male counterparts for each year,and all genders' predicted lifespans improved over time.
The two Change the word
their
countries
that had significantly longer life expectancy than others: Denmark, and Sweden, with 51.6, and 52.8 for males; 54.8, and 55.3 for females, respectively. Both Use synonyms
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countries
figures increased moderately to over seventy Change noun form
country's
countries'
years
for each gender in 1990. Use synonyms
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Moreover
Swedish females had the highest-expected lifespan with 80.7 Add a comma
,Moreover
years
in 1990.
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The
remaining three Change preposition
In the
countries
life expectancy Use synonyms
also
inclined over time, but males from Austria had the least estimation with 37.8 Linking Words
years
in 1990, which Use synonyms
was
rose by roughly 35 Unnecessary verb
apply
years
to 73.5 Use synonyms
years
in 1990. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Germany's and Belgium's estimated figures followed an upward trend over the period of 90 Linking Words
years
. They both had relatively close estimations over time.Use synonyms
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