Write about the following topic: In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread
problem
and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for Use synonyms
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. In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that Linking Words
families
are smaller with fewer Use synonyms
children
. These Use synonyms
children
are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for Use synonyms
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, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. Linking Words
This
means that the Linking Words
children
grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school age they have not learnt any Use synonyms
self control
or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did. Teachers continually complain about Add a hyphen
self-control
this
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problem
and measures should be taken to combat the situation. But I think the solution to the Use synonyms
problem
lies with the Use synonyms
families
, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their Use synonyms
children
. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit. Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do Use synonyms
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, and Linking Words
high quality
nursery schools could be established that would support Add a hyphen
high-quality
families
more in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund Use synonyms
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kind of parental supportLinking Words
,
because Remove the comma
apply
this
is no longer a Linking Words
problem
for individual Use synonyms
families
, but for society as a whole.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite