Today's essay topic: *People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.*
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drugs
abuse are Change the noun form
drug
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serious issue that threat society and it is one of the most and high dangerous Add an article
a very
problem
many countries suffer from and Fix the agreement mistake
problems
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to
drugs
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whether
they Change preposition
of whether
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learned
learnt
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friends
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trying
drugs
as fun and just for try in the Use synonyms
beging
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beginning
then
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which
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to mental health , much less Correct your spelling
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of
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responsible
responsable
to fight youth drug abuse and help the government Correct your spelling
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through
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rehabilitation
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the addicted can go and get the right treatment . Correct word choice
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite