Some feel that animal testing is cruel while others feel it is necessity. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

#feel #necessity

Animal testing has been a constant debate all around the world. Some

people

say that using

animals

for product testing is cruel

while

others are saying the other way around. In my opinion, it is inevitable not to

use

animals

when doing some tests of a new product. There are various reasons why we do animal testing.

Firstly

, they are the nearest creatures to us human beings. Scientifically,

animals

do have some similarities to

humans

According to

Charles Darwin's theory of evolution,

humans

are from monkeys that evolved as years

gone

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by.

Thus

using monkeys to do some product testing like maybe some new drugs will be reasonable before trying it

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people

Secondly

animals

are considered at the low level of the food chain.

People

believe that

animals

were created for us

humans

use

or consume.

For instance

, researchers

does

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not feel any guilt in using rats to try a certain cosmetic brand as they know that

animals

are replaceable and

does

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not have a feeling.

However

, there will always be drawbacks. One of

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the

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animal extinction. The more that we

use

animals

because of our curiosity, the more

animals

will die. In every research

laboratories

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, there will always be hundreds of thousands of

animals

dying because of our

greadiness

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greediness

readiness

to know more. Another is that new diseases are accidentally being produced as an effect of animal testing. The recent pandemic which is covid 19 is a result of animal testing being done inside a

laboraty

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laboratory

and a few

animals

escaped

thus

spreading the virus. In my opinion, animal testing is very beneficial to us

humans

as they are our first line of defence

for

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against

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new products that are being sold in the market. They are really meant to be

use

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and consumed by the

people

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4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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