ONE PROBLEM FACED BY ALMOST EVERY LARGE CITY IS TRAFFIC CONGESTION. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
Recently gridlock becoming worst in every large
city
. In my point of, view this
is the reason rush hour everyone are
using their vehicle. Change the verb form
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Therefore
, I suggest rush time
government want to increase public transport
facilities. The Above reasons and solution
I am going to explain with relevant examples Add an article
the solution
further
paragraph.
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the
people like to use their vehicles, the Correct article usage
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reasons
is that in my country the public Fix the agreement mistake
reason
transport
system is not properly running. If using public transportation time
wasted
and so tired. Because of always people are trying to ride their vehicles. For, instance in my experience, one Add a missing verb
is wasted
day
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time
was at 9.00AM.unfortunatly at
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on
day
used by public transportations and reached by 10.00AM to the hospital. In
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I didn’t do my medical checkup. However
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went to the hospital for my checkup. As a, result my hour wasted and also
money is wasted. Thus
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This
time
is wasting
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wasted
also
money-wasting who is like to go by public transport
.
For this
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want to develop public Unnecessary verb
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transport
facilities. On other
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solutions
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solution
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the state wants to develop public transportation facilities. As an example, Launching Unnecessary verb
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city
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service requirement must be reduced bus fare or either free of charge, and also
authority need to be prohibited come private vehicle inside the city
.
To conclude
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cities
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authorities
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new rules and regulations, the above problem be reduced.Wrong verb form
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