ONE PROBLEM FACED BY ALMOST EVERY LARGE CITY IS TRAFFIC CONGESTION. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Recently gridlock becoming worst in every large
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using their vehicle.
Therefore
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time
government want to increase public
transport
facilities. The Above reasons and
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people like to use their vehicles, the
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is that in my country the public
transport
system is not properly running. If using public transportation
time
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and so tired. Because of always people are trying to ride their vehicles. For, instance in my experience, one
day
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government hospital for my medical checkup, my appointment
time
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used by public transportations and reached by 10.00AM to the hospital.
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I didn’t do my medical checkup.
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went to the hospital for my checkup. As a, result my hour wasted and
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money is wasted.
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;
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money-wasting who is like to go by public
transport
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the government must
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want to develop public
transport
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hand, new
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should be introduced to the people. ,
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75% of
peoples
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are using their vehicles. Previously I mention one
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the state wants to develop public transportation facilities. As an example, Launching
city
tour bus services.
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this
service requirement must be reduced bus fare or either free of charge, and
also
authority need to be prohibited come private vehicle inside the
city
.
To conclude
, in my point of view large
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every
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become the wariest road conjunction,
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therefore
local
authority
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authorities
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will be developing public transportation system and
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new rules and regulations, the above problem be reduced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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