The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The given map illustrates the two potential sites for the establishment of a new
school
in the city
of Canterbury.
Overall
, the main difference between the two points is that the one is located downtown in comparison with the other which is in the countryside.
Initially
, the suburban location is on the northeast whereas
the downtown site is on the southwest part of Canterbury. In addition
, another important detail is that the school
in the city
centre is nearby Chatham city
(7km) which has 4,500 citizens while
Sturry Town is 5 km from the suburban school
and its population is bigger by a margin of 2,500 people. Moreover
, both sites are planned to be constructed near the main circulation system. Additionally
, the city
of Canterbury has a university department in the north. Apparently, the university is located between the county side and the residential area and it's closer to the school
in the suburbs .Submitted by mariamelina2002 on
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