The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The charts demonstrate data on the sources of
police
budget and their expenditure in the Add an article
the police
year
2017 and 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, all sources of police budget experience
a Wrong verb form
experienced
slightly
increase and the capital Change the adverb
slight
was mainly came
from the National Government. Change the verb form
mainly came
Furthermore
, the majority of the spending was used on salaries for officers and staff.
The total budget for the police had
increased considerably between 2017 and 2018 from 304.7 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
to 318.6 million
respectively. The money was mainly come
from two sources, National Government and Local taxes. The National Government contributed more than half of the total income which was 175.5 Change to the active voice
mainly came
has mainly come
million
in 2017. This
figure even rose to 177.8 million
in 2018. Meanwhile, the number of local taxes had the highest increase, more than one-ninth in 2018.
Regarding the spending, three-fourths of the money was spent on the
salaries in 2017. Correct article usage
apply
This
number , however
, decreased slightly by 6% from 75% to 69% in 2018. The loss of money had been used on developing technology, the value increased from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018 while
the cost of buildings and transport remained unchanged over a two-year period.Submitted by yoyoghurtxd on
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