The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant. Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12

The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel

to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant.

Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12
The given column graph illustrates the number of
trips
made by children in two separate years, which are 1990 and 2010 in a particular country. The vertical axis represents the number of
trips
in
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per
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million
per year and the horizontal stands for the different modes of transport like
bus
,
car
, walking, bicycle
and
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apply
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,
bus
and walking together. In 1990, the
trips
made by
bus
were dramatically higher than by other modes. About 12
million
trips
were made by
bus
, which was two times more than those made by walking and cycling each, and three times more than those made by
car
. About 7
million
trips
were made by
bus
and walking together. Two decades later, in 2010,
the
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apply
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car
trips
superseded all other modes and became approximately 12.5
million
, an increase of 8.5
million
from the figures of 1990. The
bus
trips
decreased to half and became 6
million
.
Trips
made by
bus
and walking together
also
decreased by 1
million
from the figures of 1990.
Trips
made on foot
also
decreased from 6 to 3
million
and those made by cycling reduced to 2
million
. On the whole, the column graph shows that
bus
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the bus
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was the most popular form of transport to go to and from school for children in 1990.
However
, in 2010, the
car
became the most popular mode.
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