Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverages with high level of sugar some think that these taxes are a good idea while other disagree. Discuss both you and give your opinion?
The information is provided by two maps of Liverton
docks
in 1980 and today. Looking at the diagrams it immediately becomes clear that the function of the docks
has completly
changed.
In the Correct your spelling
completely
past
they were intended to work with cargo and other targets of real functioning Add a comma
,past
docks
. But now there are
just a tourist place. Two of the warehouses Change the verb form
is
was
converted into an education centre on the north side of the river and into an Correct subject-verb agreement
were
apartaments
building on the south side. One of the warehouses was demolished, today Correct your spelling
apartment
on
its place is Change preposition
in
playing
area for children. Correct article usage
a playing
Likewise
, instead
of two crans there have been built a hotel and a sailing club. And one of the ships has been turned into a museum. In order to stop water flows there is now a flood barrier and next to it there is a bridge for Correct article usage
the convinience
convinience
of moving between Correct your spelling
convenience
tthe
sides of the river.
Correct your spelling
the
To sum up
, it is certainly can be said that for some reasons
Liverton Fix the agreement mistake
reason
docks
were considered to converting into a tourist place and it has done realy
qualitatively.Correct your spelling
really
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite