Some commentators feel that, grandparents should live together with their childrens and grandchildrens, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments of this debate and reach your own conclusion

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most

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friend of a

child

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of

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the

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people said that

,

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they should not live with them and

this

topic has become an

intregral

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integral

part of raising

deabte

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debate

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in the present world.

While

,proponents of the arguments are in favour,

however

,the

oponents

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opponents

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compeletly

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completely

against the relevance of the topic.In my opinion,

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with

grand parants

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grandparents

has more positive impact than negatives. To commence with, there are a number of arguments in favour of my belief. The most prominent one is that,

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with

grand parents

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grandparents

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gives a

child

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joy and

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relaxation. The

children

became more confident to get them .It

also

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a positive mentality in human

child

while

, some

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story and fairy tales are

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by their

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grandparents

.

According to

the research conducted by Western Sydney University

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reveals

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that,most of the

children

those,

children

who

lives

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with their

grandparents

are more intelligent than others.

On the other hand

,critics may point out that,one of the most significant disadvantages of live

children

with

grandparents

is that,

grandparents

may ruin their quality time when the

children

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with others.

For instance

, a survey conducted by

United

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reveals

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that,most of the

child

are being disturbed by their granny

while

they passed

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quality time with their friends.

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, most of the

children

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not want to get

along with

their

grandparents

.

Secondly

, when the

children

get into

teeage

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teenage

they may take their

grandparents

to

doctor

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for

treatments

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and

this

process might

disturbed

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them.

To conclude

, even there are

a lots

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of demerits associated with

this

matter. The advantages outweigh the disadvantages,and

this

topic became

more

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crucial part of our life.

Therefore

, efficient

of

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positive living with

grandparents

should be promoted.