Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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In the modern world, private
cars
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have increased so dramatically over the past 30 years leading to heavy
traffic
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congestion in several cities in the world. From my perspective,
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statement is true. I strongly think that there are many reasons
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cars
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that government should have measures and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view. The measures which governments can take to help reduce the use of private
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include providing public transport and working from
home
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. Providing public
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at cheap fares can convince workers to leave their private
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at
home
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. Public
transports
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may seem less convenient than private
cars
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but they can save time and workers do not have to worry about finding the
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park. One of the most important reasons why people increased using an
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car
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is that using
private
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car
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is more convenient to
work
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or travel.
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, if they want to go somewhere, they have their own vehicles to travel anywhere, anytime, they want
while
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taking public transport is time-consuming.
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, public transport is not convenient for people who have children. Another reason to support
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is the fact that today, the price of a
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is cheaper than 30 years ago.
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the fact that It makes they can perchance easily. These
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show that
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personal
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car
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plays a major role in
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the problem
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of
traffic
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jams. One of the best approaches/measures governments can take in busy
city
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is to encourage workers to
work
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from
home
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.
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the latest research conducted by Bangkok University, it was revealed that
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from
home
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can reduce
traffic
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jam
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. When employees
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from
home
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, they do not have to commute to and from the office.
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leads to a significant reduction in the number of vehicles on the road during rush hours, which in turn helps alleviate
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congestion. From my
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experience, I have worked from
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for months during
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pandemic. I found that I could save time spent driving to
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but I have more free time to stay close to my family. Personally, I prefer working from
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to
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to working in an office since productivity in both places
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comparable but
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satisfaction is much higher. In conclusion, I would like to say that I strongly believe that because of the ownership of
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,
traffic
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congestion has increased in recent years.
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, I
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think that the government should encourage people to
work
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from
home
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • car ownership
  • traffic congestion
  • urban areas
  • commuters
  • environmental health
  • public transportation systems
  • incentives
  • carpooling
  • electric vehicles
  • taxes and fees
  • bike lanes
  • pedestrian-friendly infrastructure
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