Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In the modern world, private

cars

have increased so dramatically over the past 30 years leading to heavy

traffic

congestion in several cities in the world. From my perspective,

this

statement is true. I strongly think that there are many reasons

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cars

that government should have measures and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view. The measures which governments can take to help reduce the use of private

cars

include providing public transport and working from

home

. Providing public

transports

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at cheap fares can convince workers to leave their private

cars

at

home

. Public

transports

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may seem less convenient than private

cars

but they can save time and workers do not have to worry about finding the

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park. One of the most important reasons why people increased using an

ownership

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car

is that using

private

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car

is more convenient to

work

or travel.

For instance

, if they want to go somewhere, they have their own vehicles to travel anywhere, anytime, they want

while

taking public transport is time-consuming.

In addition

, public transport is not convenient for people who have children. Another reason to support

this

is the fact that today, the price of a

car

is cheaper than 30 years ago.

This

is

due to

the fact that It makes they can perchance easily. These

example

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car

plays a major role in

problem

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the problem

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of

traffic

jams. One of the best approaches/measures governments can take in busy

city

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is to encourage workers to

work

from

home

.

For example

,

according to

the latest research conducted by Bangkok University, it was revealed that

work

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from

home

can reduce

traffic

jam

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. When employees

work

from

home

, they do not have to commute to and from the office.

This

leads to a significant reduction in the number of vehicles on the road during rush hours, which in turn helps alleviate

traffic

congestion. From my

work

experience, I have worked from

home

for months during

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pandemic. I found that I could save time spent driving to

work

but I have more free time to stay close to my family. Personally, I prefer working from

home

to

work

to working in an office since productivity in both places

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comparable but

employee’s

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satisfaction is much higher. In conclusion, I would like to say that I strongly believe that because of the ownership of

cars

,

traffic

congestion has increased in recent years.

However

, I

also

think that the government should encourage people to

work

from

home

.