This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant
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The line graph above illustrates the quota of four different materials- Paper & cardboard,
glass
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containers
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, aluminium cans, and plastics- from 1982 to 2010 in a specific country.
Overall
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, the total amount of materials recycled increased in
this
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period.
However
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, not all types of materials had the same growth rates.
While
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the number for aluminium cans and plastic increased gradually, the percentage of paper & cardboard and
glass
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containers
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have some fluctuation over the period. In 1982, about 65% of paper & cardboard were recycled.
This
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figure reach its peak of 80% in 1994. From
then
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, it decreased steadily to 70% in 2010. Another material that had the same characteristic was
glass
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containers
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.
Glass
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containers
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also
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were first recycled in 1982. Starting at 50%, it
initially
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had a downward trajectory and
then
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reach its lowest at 40%;
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, it recovered, and slowly increased to 60% in 2010. Not until 1986, people started recycling aluminium cans. Starting at around 5% in 1986, it increased significantly to around 45% in 2010. Plastic was the
last
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one being recycled. Recycling plastic was not so popular, its figure increased steadily from around 2% to 8% over time.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, containers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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