Some people believe that humans should be able to use animals for their own benefit, while others argue that the rights of animals should be protected. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

A bunch of people think that nobody has the right to kill creatures

whereas

, others opine that they can use them for their own benefit. I go with the latter view which I discuss in forthcoming paragraphs. Well, everyone has a right to freedom so, it is obvious that they can move freely anywhere.

Therefore

, people don't need to interfere in their privacy because

god

gives life to all living beings. If anyone kills the

animals

he will go against the

god

and law of nature.

For example

, most holy books show that

god

gives different

power

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powers

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strength

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strengths

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and senses to feel and live on the earth

according to

this

, all are equal even if they are

animals

and humans so, they can live together in all situations.

However

, humans are the best creation of

god

, they have brains to think if he can do anything so, it's not wrong he can use

animals

to do his work .

Moreover

, some

species

are survived

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by killing and eating other

animals

,

then

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man cannot do

this

thing in his life.

For instance

, on a planet every

species

are

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dependent on other

species

to make a food chain

otherwise

,some

animals

become large in quantity

instead

of others.

As a result

,It

makes

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big disturbances in the food chain. In conclusion,

although

all

animals

have the right to live without any disturbance, it is important to make a balance in nature so,

if

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that if

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people like to kill some

species

that's not wrong whether they eat or do work from them.