The line graph given illustrates the number of people who travel to work by three separate means of transport in the UK from 1970 to 2030.
The given line graph represents the total
oil
used in four different areas, namely the US, China
, Western Europe
& Japan
and Middle
East over a 22-year period, starting from 2009.
Correct article usage
the Middle
Overall
, the
Correct article usage
apply
oil
consumption
in the US, Western Europe
and Japan
witness a downward trend, while
the opposite is true for China
and the Middle
East. Additionally
, US oil
consumption
is by far most
Correct article usage
the most
widely-consumed
over the period shown.
Correct your spelling
widely consumed
To begin
with, the US oil
consumption
ranked highest with nearly 9 million
, followed by Western Europe
& Japan
with 4 million
and China
, Middle
East with exactly 2 million
in the first examined year. Following that, the
that of Western Correct article usage
apply
Europe
& Japan
fall dramatically by 2 million
in 2025. Conversely
, the figure for the Middle
East and China
rise steadily from 2 to 2,5 and 4 million
, respectively. While
,
there is a fluctuation in the US area.
Turning next to the total Remove the comma
apply
consumption
in the US is below 10 million
over a 16-year period then
it is forecasted that it will go down under
8 Change preposition
to under
million
in 2030. Having a similar trend, albeit less pronounced, the figure for China
and Western Europe
& Japan
witness a small drop of 0,5 million
. In contrast
, the total oil
consumption
in Middle
East area Correct article usage
the Middle
surpass
Western Correct subject-verb agreement
surpasses
Europe
& Japan
at 2,5 million
then
it rise
continuously to around 3 Change the verb form
rises
million
during the same time frame.Submitted by luudang97 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, china, europe, japan, middle, consumption, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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