The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
The pie charts show the proportions of people volunteering in various kinds of
organisations
, in 2008 and 2014.
It is clear that
while
volunteer participation in environmental,
sport
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sports
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, and
health
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healthcare
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care
organisatons
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organisations
increased, the opposite was true for other types of
organisations
.
Additionally
, the percentages of
health
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healthcare
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care
volunteers
were by far the lowest during the two years. In 2008, volunteering in educational
organisations
was the most common choice, accounting for nearly a quarter of all
volunteers
,
while
21% and 18% of
volunteers
took part in environmental and art projects respectively. 15% of
volunteers
worked in sports
organisations
, and another 15% in other
organisations
,
while
only 6% volunteered in
health
care
. In 2014, significantly more
volunteers
worked in environmental and
sport
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sports
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organizations compared with the other fields, at 29% and 25% respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for art and other
volunteers
both fell by 6%. There was
also
a slight fall in
volunteers
in educational organizations, at 17%,
while
volunteering in
health
care
was still the least preferred option, at only 8%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words organisations, health, care, volunteers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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