Two charts are given in the presented illustrations. The former one conveys information on how energy is consumed in a mundane Australian family, while the latter diagram shows the figure of greenhouse gas emissions that are a result of the energy use

Two charts are given in the presented illustrations. The former

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conveys information on how energy is consumed in a mundane Australian family,

while

the latter diagram shows the figure of greenhouse gas emissions that are a result of

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energy use.

Overall

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it is clear that

an overwhelming difference is seen when comparing the two. As can be seen in the first pie chart, heating takes up the majority of energy utilization with a whopping 42%.

This

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of the other five elements.

On the other hand

, cooling appears to

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the lowest number with a mere 2%.

Furthermore

, the second diagram displays the factor which is emitting the most gas

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water heating at a rate of 32%. With no more than 3%, cooling is once more at the bottom. A

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similarity

could be noticed between both charts

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since both low percentages tend to be cooling.