Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us. Other believe that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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recorded before the human story and their experiences. I disagree that some people think
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has nothing for
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. In my view,
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could alarm us about their issues and solve their problems
today
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.
First,
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let us talk about the Qin
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dynasty
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, the first unified
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in Chinese
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. If we did not have a Qin
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, there would be different words, different languages and
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many different countries in
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land
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. So does
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have nothing for
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? I think we must from two directions analyze
Qin
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history
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, Polity and Unify
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country
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the country
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land
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. From polity, it teaches us how to manage a unified
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, it has large
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and different cultures from people in the
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. So we must unify their words and speak the same language, and we must accept and study their culture. And Unify
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land
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, that was important
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. A stronger
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must have a unified
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land
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of land
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. So why was the Tang
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the greatest
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in the world at that time, and
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China is the second strongest
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in the world
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Second,
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the
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issue. I think the Song
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should have more problems to alarm us
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. The Song
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was the power of the economic empire in the world. But the
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and art were important
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to
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the
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at that time, so the manager ignored the military force and never developed technology at that time.
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, the Song
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was replaced by another
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. So
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why we developed technology
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. It is from
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experience and alarm.
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,
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does not just teach the
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how to develop. It’s
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teaching people how to make good guys in their lives. So we have been studying many experiences and many theories from
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • insights
  • progression
  • values
  • beliefs
  • heritage
  • identity
  • applicable
  • biased
  • subjective
  • practical
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