Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us. Other believe that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The
history
recorded before the human story and their experiences. I disagree that some people think
history
has nothing for
today
. In my view,
history
could alarm us about their issues and solve their problems
today
.
First,
let us talk about the Qin
dynasty
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, the first unified
country
in Chinese
history
. If we did not have a Qin
dynasty
, there would be different words, different languages and
then
many different countries in
this
land
. So does
this
history
have nothing for
today
? I think we must from two directions analyze
Qin
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history
, Polity and Unify
country
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the country
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land
. From polity, it teaches us how to manage a unified
country
, it has large
land
and different cultures from people in the
country
. So we must unify their words and speak the same language, and we must accept and study their culture. And Unify
country
land
, that was important
today
. A stronger
country
must have a unified
country
land
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. So why was the Tang
dynasty
the greatest
country
in the world at that time, and
today
China is the second strongest
country
in the world
.
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Second,
the
history
issue. I think the Song
dynasty
should have more problems to alarm us
today
. The Song
dynasty
was the power of the economic empire in the world. But the
cultural
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and art were important
of
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the
country
at that time, so the manager ignored the military force and never developed technology at that time.
Finally
, the Song
dynasty
was replaced by another
dynasty
. So
that is
why we developed technology
today
. It is from
history
experience and alarm.
Finally
,
history
does not just teach the
country
how to develop. It’s
also
teaching people how to make good guys in their lives. So we have been studying many experiences and many theories from
history
.
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  • values
  • beliefs
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  • identity
  • applicable
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