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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart provides information on how many
residencies
 grew from 2000 until 2009 in two cities in the UK, which are
Derby
 and
Nottingham
.
Overall
 it can be clearly seen that the
number
 of
houses
 in
Derby
 shows an upward trend over the given
period
while
Nottingham
 had a fluctuating trend in the same
period
.
Although
 the
number
 of new
residencies
 grew in
Nottingham
 fluctuated, eventually
at the end
 of the given
period
 the
number
 skyrocketed compared to the beginning. Looking at the chart in more detail,
Derby
 starts with approximately 40
houses
 in 2000 and the
number
 keeps growing until 2003, reaching precisely 120
houses
. Over five years since 2003,
Derby
 shows a stagnant trend with no new
residencies
 being built. After the stagnant
period
,the
number
 skyrocketed and reached a peak of approximately 350
houses
 in 2009.
On the other hand
,the figure
of
Change preposition
for
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 new
residencies
at
Change preposition
in
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Nottingham
 was on top in 2000 with 50
houses
. Until 2005,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words residencies, derby, nottingham, number, houses, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "skyrocketed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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