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The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given bar chart provides information on how many
residencies
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 grew from 2000 until 2009 in two cities in the UK, which are
Derby
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 and
Nottingham
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.
Overall
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 it can be clearly seen that the
number
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 of
houses
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 in
Derby
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 shows an upward trend over the given
period
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while
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Nottingham
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 had a fluctuating trend in the same
period
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.
Although
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 the
number
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 of new
residencies
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 grew in
Nottingham
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 fluctuated, eventually
at the end
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 of the given
period
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 the
number
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 skyrocketed compared to the beginning. Looking at the chart in more detail,
Derby
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 starts with approximately 40
houses
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 in 2000 and the
number
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 keeps growing until 2003, reaching precisely 120
houses
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. Over five years since 2003,
Derby
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 shows a stagnant trend with no new
residencies
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 being built. After the stagnant
period
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,the
number
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 skyrocketed and reached a peak of approximately 350
houses
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 in 2009.
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,the figure
of
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for
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 new
residencies
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at
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in
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Nottingham
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 was on top in 2000 with 50
houses
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. Until 2005,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words residencies, derby, nottingham, number, houses, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "skyrocketed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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