Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, while some others think it is a waste of money. Agree or disagree?

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investment in

artists

.

While

some claim that it is essential for the governors to give all types of

artists

support, the opposite makes a statement that it is a financial loss.

While

the former is valid to some extent, I still regard myself as an advocate of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt, it is persuasive to note that the government should not come to all categories of

artists

’ assistance, except for traditional ones. These days, people, especially the young, have a tendency to listen to trending music

such

as Pop, Rap and Indie.

Therefore

, old melodies no longer appeal to

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tastes and gradually disappear in the music marketplace.

This

results in a considerable decrease

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the number of people following a path to

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unpopular art form. For these reasons, the state needs to take

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to preserve

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cultural identity.

For instance

, cai luong singers are supported financially by the authorities and have the great ability to perform in certain events.

Hence

, it is crucial for the government to assist the

artists

, but not all kinds of them.

Nevertheless

, I still oppose the view that the financial contribution of the governors for

artists

is down the drain. All

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countries, especially under-developed nations, need to prioritize common concerns including education,

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and other aspects of life. To illustrate, children residing in remote areas have to live in destitute and illiteracy conditions, the government,

consequently

, had

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money into

this

issue. Conspicuously,

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state funding is more significant for the life sides compared to the

artists

.

Thus

, it is wasteful of money providing that the authorities assist all classifications of

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. In conclusion, it is understandable why some may argue that all

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artists

should be supported by the governors.

However

, I cannot agree with

such

a view given the aforementioned reasons.