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In the future all cars, bues and trucks will be driverless. The only people traevelling inside these vehichcles will be passengers. Do you think the adventages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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As technology is constantly changing and evolving, in the future, the automobile industry will not require any driver to operate, as transportation will be done only by
the
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passengers.
This
 essay will demonstrate how self-driving transportation can be beneficial but will
also
 show that
this
 can lead to
such
 problems. Whilst, acknowledging that there are benefits, the essay will argue that the disadvantages of the
driverless
 automobile outweigh the advantages. One of the main advantages of self-driving is that it decreased traffic accidents caused by human error. As these transportations use a computer system to operate, it eliminates the errors caused by humans which can improve the safety of the travellers.
For instance
, China has begun their
driverless
 buses, and the statistics show that the computer system generates
car
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improve
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 the safety of its traveller by ninety twenty per cent compared to a bus with a driver.
However
, the elimination of drivers can lead to some worrying issues. One of the prominent issues will be the
an
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increase
 in
unemployment
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 rate. With automobile transportation, people will be jobless, as their job has been taken by the computer system.
This
 can impact the
economic
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 negatively.
As a consequence
, there will be economic uncertainty,
decrease
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 in consumption and an
increase
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 crime rates.
Furthermore
,
government
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 will have to
increase
 their expenditure, as they have to
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 the cost of welfare support. In conclusion,
although
driverless
 cars, buses and trucks can
elimate
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eliminate
the
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traffic accidents, there will be an
increase
of
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 unemployment rates which can affect the economy as a whole which is a difficult issue to tackle.
Hence
, the negative effects of
driverless
transportations
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definately
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definitely
 outweigh the positives.
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