A close relative of yours is having a birthday lunch next week, but you know you will be working. Write a letter to your boss or supervisor to ask for some time off. In your letter, – explain the situation and why you particularly want to attend the lunch – specify the dates, times and amount of time off you will need – offer to work late or come in early another time to make up for the time

Dear Mr Patel, I need permission for 2 hours
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next week. On that day, my close friend
Jay
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birthday. After the
party
, I will rejoin
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my work. He planned to throw a
party
in Shalimar restaurant. And coming next week he is moving to
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country permanently. So, I want to attend the
party
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register
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some memories
wih
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with
him. Once he moved
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abroad, he cannot come maximum of 3 years. Jay is planning on
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ie 10th
june
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. On
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I am requesting your permission to attend the
party
for 3 hours. Afternoon 12 to 3. If
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I cannot finish my presentation, that we are presenting to the client for
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progress meeting, I will finish it by working
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Saturday.
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sincerely Anand
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