the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produces electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates different steps through which cold
water
is used for electricity production.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the electric power generation process involves various stages including pumping Linking Words
water
and using geothermal area, turbine and generator.
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Firstly
, the process is initiated by pumping down the cold Linking Words
water
into the injection well 4.5 kilometres deep. Use synonyms
Then
passes through the hot rocks within the geothermal zone and transmits towards the production well.Here, the hot Linking Words
water
gets pumped up to reach the inside of the condenser. In the subsequent stage, it converts to steam which is transferred into the turbine and acts as the power. Use synonyms
Finally
, the turbine powers the generator and electricity will be produced through electric towers.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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