The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, amd planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps provide information on future changes to a site which is an industrial area now in the town of Norbiton.
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, the goal is to modify the area to a residential neighbourhood with other modern amenities. Currently, there are many factory areas with a roundabout and a road to the east
side
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of the property. There is farmland on the north
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which is on the other
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of the river. Norbiton town is located to the west of the area.
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with, as a part of the new plan, a new roundabout will be added to the junction at the entrance. A medical centre and some shops are to be built on either
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of the entry road facing the roundabout. New housing facilities are to be added on the northwest
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with a road.
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, a new playground will be constructed on the east
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in between some new housing areas and the river,
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in the far east , corner a new school is to be included as well. Northern
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farmlands will be connected by a bridge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • current condition
  • proposed future development
  • primarily
  • lining the roads
  • flowing from west to east
  • northern border
  • residential area
  • housing units
  • replace the factories
  • infrastructure
  • new bridge
  • connecting
  • creation of a park
  • expansion
  • community-friendly environment
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