The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked

cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the UK's men and women
smokers
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count
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from 2011 to 2021.
Overall
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, the
number
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of male
smokers
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was more than females throughout the entire period, and another key feature is that the
count
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of
both
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genders who smoked cigarettes decreased through
this
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period. The
number
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of men and women
smokers
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was the most at the beginning with just over 4 and 3.5
million
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respectively.
Although
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the
count
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of
both
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genders of
smokers
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decreased in the range of 1 and 2
million
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between 2011 and 2012, that was relatively stable for
both
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gentlemen and ladies cigarette
smokers
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over the next 7 years, corresponding to around 2.5
million
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and 1.5
million
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respectively.
Additionally
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, the
number
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of
both
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genders of
smokers
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diminished steadily in the rest of the period, reaching nearly 1
million
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for each.
Furthermore
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, the lowest difference between the
count
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of men and women
smokers
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was just below 0.5
million
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at the beginning and end of the duration;
in contrast
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,
this
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hit the highest point in 2015 when the
number
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of male
smokers
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was three times as much as that of females.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words smokers, count, number, both, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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