The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked

cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays the UK's men and women
smokers
count
from 2011 to 2021.
Overall
, the
number
of male
smokers
was more than females throughout the entire period, and another key feature is that the
count
of
both
genders who smoked cigarettes decreased through
this
period. The
number
of men and women
smokers
was the most at the beginning with just over 4 and 3.5
million
respectively.
Although
the
count
of
both
genders of
smokers
decreased in the range of 1 and 2
million
between 2011 and 2012, that was relatively stable for
both
gentlemen and ladies cigarette
smokers
over the next 7 years, corresponding to around 2.5
million
and 1.5
million
respectively.
Additionally
, the
number
of
both
genders of
smokers
diminished steadily in the rest of the period, reaching nearly 1
million
for each.
Furthermore
, the lowest difference between the
count
of men and women
smokers
was just below 0.5
million
at the beginning and end of the duration;
in contrast
,
this
hit the highest point in 2015 when the
number
of male
smokers
was three times as much as that of females.
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