There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides. (Discussion essay)

The rate at which serious

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are increasing daily is alarming and detrimental to the safety of society, and

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to control

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irresponsible acts serious

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and

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are to be implemented. Some argue that execution of the

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/delinquents is the best solution to curb felony,

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others argue that resorting to other

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and

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would help better.

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essay discusses the rationale behind both

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views. Some critics believe that prosecuting

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criminals

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death

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penalty

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could not only send a strong message to society that whoever deliberately commits

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would not be let go with impunity, but

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instil fear in the minds of

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that would refrain them from committing sin, thereby substantially reducing or limiting/restricting the number of antisocial acts o violence, bloodshed and cold-blooded murders.

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could be exemplified by the fall/sharp decline in crime rates in Iraq from 50 to 15

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after

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included the

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penalty

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for punishing the

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who defy

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. Needless to say, extreme

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,

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sentence would warn the perpetrators who would neither become repeat

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after serving their jail term nor commit

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as they would be gripped with fear or anxiety of losing their

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. (Avoid being repetitive with your content) Having said that, some opine that slightly liberal

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and

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should be charged on the

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depending on their

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, thereby allowing them to reflect on their wrongdoings and undergo self-improvement. To be more precise , activities ,

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as community services, rehabilitating

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,

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and judicial sentence could be some

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lesser intense than

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penalty

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that could be imposed on

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for their offences which would not only help maintain a balanced, fair, and just judiciary

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but

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give them adequate time

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plentiful opportunities to realise the agony of separation and its impact on the victim , repent or regret ,thereby proving to be extremely beneficial in reforming the offender’s lives in a positive way.

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could be exemplified by the introduction of community services and

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by the United States Government for liberal

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like breaking the traffic rules or code of conduct in public places which are minor

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, and so those who transcend law would be reformed.

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,

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could be

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basis and

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fair trial/just retribution is extremely crucial.

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, resorting to liberal

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than execution for lesser intense

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could help keep

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in check and improve their lives;

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,

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is not justifiable for

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serious and heinous

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like rape,

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and murder

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in which the offender should be coerced with

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penalty

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which would stop every other person with criminal bent of mind to think twice before engaging in

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acts of shame.